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Old 12-20-2016, 06:48 PM   #5
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Timeless, technically speaking, shits fire. Flow was insane, rhymes were fresh and imagery was varied with ksome nice poetics. What I didn't like was the lack of creativity. It was pretty boring. You had nothing going new or fresh to offer In your social commentary so I had to take point take away.

Jesodist, cool verse my man. Your concept and voice ompletely overpowered your opponent. Was this shot about God or Ancient Aliens? I wasn't too clear that but the schemes and progression made up for that bit of ambiguity.

This is a cool battle. At the end of the day I gotta go with jesodist for operating on a higher creative scale. I will say, tho, the boy timeless had some nice wordinguy th rough touted. But it wasn't enou b to knock Jeso off the winner platform.
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