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Zygote: I felt you were rambling a lot. The main character etc. didn't really seem to have a meaningful spot in your verse beside of ''venting'' what went on in his/her mind, I'm not saying it can't be powerful as well but it didn't really have the impact I feel it could have had. Your verse has TONS of potential but it didn't really get there for me. Your last line could have been deep as fuck or something but instead the mofo just walks away because the topic got too emotional? I mean.. Come on, seemed like a lazy closure to me.
Beside of the shit I pointed out I enjoyed it for the most part. You got some lines in there that made me think and the highlight of your verse to me was the BC/AD-line. That line was dope as fuck. The flow was easy to follow throughout and overall I'd rate your verse at an 6.5/10. Above average, but not enough of an impact to really stand out in the crowd. A bit more consistent or thought out approach to your verse could have made this several levels doper imho because there's a bunch of great lines in there I feel doesn't really do its justice because it's just open minded rambling, put it in context. Still a great read and a decent verse that could have been so much more.

ZeeDee: First off I want to say that I applaud the fact that you chose to go with both the picture and the title while you could have sticked to just one of them. I like that. Shows that you're willing to take a challenge when presented with one. You also follow through with some pretty weird and obscure shit in the first half of your verse. The story you're telling is like a sci-fi horror collabo between Stanley Kubrick and Steven Spielberg. So far you've definately covered aliens, sex and sociopaths. It's fucked up and creative, as a being basicly being raised by 4chan during my teenage years I applaud your approach so far.

Allright.. Just started reading the first four lines into the verse. What the fuck dude? Did Steven and Stanley want some help from Quentin Tarantino as well? If there's one thing about your verse beside of the vulgar themes it's the fact that it's anything else than predictable. I'll try to wipe the mental images from my head of kids having sex with a cat from my brain and read on.

Our mission is prudent, I signal my unit to kill all rapists on site
Not wasting no time on debating their crimes, just making space through their minds
Like we're playing a video game made for saving mankind
20 points for every alien fried and I have 80 tonight
I kick in the door and witness this whore raping two victims with four....
Tentacle swords in intimate force with one in their mouths; both ends are absorbed
^Allright, I'm confident this this could very well have been a collabo project between the three I mentioned earlier.

Allright. I've read your verse and the imagery is ridiculous, the story is on point and as fucked up as it could have been. You NAILED the topic given, the flow and structure could have been a lot better but overall this shit was beyond solid in my opinion; Bottomline, it was BANANAS. Shit was vivid and creative and I love me some crazy. Well done.

MVGT: ZeeDee. He gets it on the story, creativity and really did the topic justice. Dope battle but I think ZeeDee outshined Zygote in this one, which is weird cuz Zygote usually drops some pretty dope shit.