Netcees - View Single Post - Infiltration (2-0) vs Barcotic (2-1)

Schadenfreude · 12-17-2016, 04:30 PM

This is extremely close, I almost did a bar-by-bar breakdown. Both had some great creativity in their metaphors & wordplay, yet both lacked in overall punch impact. Barc it seemed as tho you dumbed-down yo bars, don't simplify your concepts, just aim to be more harsh. Inf first off you were stretched asf, but more importantly, you saturated the verse w/ word association schemes, which are creative, but those are best utilized in helping punches, not being the punch. Anyway, my personal preference would be to vote for Barc, but I'm edging it to Inf, because he had more to offer substantively & literally..long winded ass bars, VOTE - INFILTRATION.

12-17-2016, 04:30 PM	#6
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	This is extremely close, I almost did a bar-by-bar breakdown. Both had some great creativity in their metaphors & wordplay, yet both lacked in overall punch impact. Barc it seemed as tho you dumbed-down yo bars, don't simplify your concepts, just aim to be more harsh. Inf first off you were stretched asf, but more importantly, you saturated the verse w/ word association schemes, which are creative, but those are best utilized in helping punches, not being the punch. Anyway, my personal preference would be to vote for Barc, but I'm edging it to Inf, because he had more to offer substantively & literally..long winded ass bars, *VOTE - INFILTRATION*. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.