[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

on my dick is where ur whore stays, actin sloppy
runnin bored game, beatin the box be foreplay.. that's Jumanji
Good concept, but the wording gave little impact
found a weapon im certain to spark, the cal is present
metal that will have u curled in a park, no calisthenics
Lol..dope
challenge ended. a fight? stop grinnin like u tuff
ur a Christmas tree; apply roundhouses to ur limbs n light u up
Again different wording would've brought this concept over
flattened tons w/ heavy beatings, wanna face me b?
just know I'd tap ur mug in any meeting, call it A.D.D
Decent
on rb I gave u the business'n u aint risen yet, lad
battle career's at such a standstill, it should be an internet fad
Basic
vs ill nik-A in BA? u neeeeeed to improve w/ the pen
his verse made u look like a bird & for no phoenix would do it again
Weak
3-0? 2 no shows is why'n only proves the shit is fake
yeah u got here on ur own, now try opponents who participate
Lol..good personal
PLZ diss my tats! I stay chin up w/ bold grins, fucker ..
ur just looking at relinquishing u could give up ur own skin colour
Bad wording cost u again
ur bleeding since u chirped w/ a dude lookin to throw
gone tribal; sleeping in the dirt w/ a few hooks to the nose
Decent
homicide detectives after barc, I tell em stay tuned
they searchin for more pieces of ur heart than Zelda playthroughs
Good closer

VERSUS

Originally Posted by Aero

He starts posting upset, swaying, has no control over himself
Witty's dad thread, every post lets us know he's that much closer to death
Good opener
Ghost from a tec, Desperado style, leave holes in this man
I'm bringing a guitar to open mic like musicians at a poetry slam
Decent
A pole in each hand (pause) AND liquor? I'm maiming him
I'll get drunk and draw on you, that's a wine and paint event
Pretty good
Even in large cities I'm noticed.. he's frail, no one's flocking to him
Last girl to spot you in a crowd raised the bar off your chest at a popular gym
Lol..nice
You scare easily, start internet beef if you dare seeing me
I'll be at your crib from a transaction online that's Air BnB
Very clever
Bad temper, when I yell hold me back I become a thug
Last time Barc yelled hold me back he gave an unwanted hug
Lol..another good one
Haven't won a tourney yet bitch, & Schad left you forever upset
Call him the Fresh Prince, gave you a Summer Classic you'll never forget
Dope personal
Growing old is rough, but women say I look great, toned & buff
I hear you're getting good looks too,. cuz your jumper is broke as fuck
Lol..best bar, so far
Your girl let my sperm crust on her, you ignore, it's a shitty facade
She's trying to explain the foreign film you're hoping she means City of God
Oh SHIT, LOTB
You really are odd, sniper on the roof to make you ghost partner
Get your car lit up from a block away that's a remoter starter
Nice closer

AERO..lil asian fool bodied shit tbh, I've said he'd be beastly if he took shit serious, instead of trolling all the fucking time. But yea, Barc was decent, had great concepts as usual, it's just too many wording issues took away a lot of the impact.