Des -Russian good current event, Maxwell kinda obv but cute, rickon had to look up but concept makes sense dece, iron man is aiiiight, lol @ mad max thunder dome.
Overall good verse,safe, no misses.
Max - cotton nose aight, gassed up inflation lol dolls get inflated w air, I guess oxygen is gas so ok it works, missing rib worded kinda awkward, cells radiation a cool concept just needed dif wording, gourd on painting had to look up, it's ok kinda obscure
Overall I liked the concepts,
Good battle. Des was cleaner here
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Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.
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