[ZeeDee]

ThisIs.... the best verse I've read so far this week... the flow was good start to finish and the idea was creative and colorful as well as astrological and with the additional word play used with that.

Pointing at something I could never explain
The skies, the stars, the weather, the rain
Celestial plains, a land of hope where no days go violent
A stroke of the brush & run across a rainbow smiling

Now, I rarely will ever quote anyones verse, but this section was so deep and dope at the same time. The imagery of this was smile worthy. This was a very enjoyable read and I think I will have to stay on the lookout for you. The concept you brought to life of a perfect world was sureal and I was captured by the details of it and wanting to book a flight there immediately.

Inno, the concept of this was great and your imagery was great too. Very detailed in your descriptions and the personal touch you made in being the character was well displayed with a lot of tension within his role as the devil.... some of your word choices seem kinda weird, but it still read nicely. I was wishing a bit more polished flow, but you did a more natural flow structure and I can appreciate that too. The way you narrated this was the strongest quality of this piece. The hatred expressed is clear and sounds devilish so I feel your grasp of it completely as I read it.


Iked both verses, but one was just more polished in their writing.

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