[IamBenT]

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Flow is really great, and its vivid with a strong sense of personality and writer's voice.

I can really relate to coming back from afar, only to find things are just not what they were. its kind of like a bittersweet homecoming in a way.

I'm glancing... through a window of my soul,
and it hits me like a brick through the window when it's cold.
I'm feeling bitter and old, living as a soldier..
Tell me that you've been through this, and it's over.
The clock starts ticking, first breath, first step..
Then the next one left leaves ya closer to death.
So I guess that it's best, I seize the day..
Live life by example... lead the way..

this beginning just reads so well, cant wait to actually hear it over a beat.

This is a dope track, quality thinking song, really coming in to your element here, again looking forward to the beat and what you did with that hook