Netcees - View Single Post - ill nik-A 1-0 vs Allen Knight 1-0

Aero · 11-30-2016, 10:04 AM

Nika - your carry over multis were horrendous. I didn't like one punch or concept in this verse. This was a wordy, choppy verse with predictable punchlines.

Allen - you had a couple good concepts. That metal rings could've been so dope but my how you butchered it. Only line I kinda liked was Freaknik even thoug preductable. The more balls than all star game was just lazy, Fidel fed Ls is no good.

Poor battle here and I won't honor it with a vote.

But since Cred will delete this post if I don't I'll go Allen for being a lil more creative even though he bludgeoned good concepts.

11-30-2016, 10:04 AM	#12
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Nika - your carry over multis were horrendous. I didn't like one punch or concept in this verse. This was a wordy, choppy verse with predictable punchlines. Allen - you had a couple good concepts. That metal rings could've been so dope but my how you butchered it. Only line I kinda liked was Freaknik even thoug preductable. The more balls than all star game was just lazy, Fidel fed Ls is no good. Poor battle here and I won't honor it with a vote. But since Cred will delete this post if I don't I'll go Allen for being a lil more creative even though he bludgeoned good concepts. __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.