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Rap Maestro go feed some other posts man. I'm tellin you that as a mod because you've upped your post like four times lol, and because I think reading what other guys do around here will help you. It helped me when I first joined here and I've progressed pretty far man. Note how they progress through their rhyme schemes and they're piece and try to emulate that. Also try using bigger words other than just words like die. If you use a bigger word that means the exact same thing suddenly you appear ten times smarter lol. Keep droppin man. And go feed some OMs.
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