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Old 11-28-2016, 09:43 PM   #7
Suthaveli
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wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population
im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage
kill u then beat u in the after life while i blatt uzi's
i'll have 13 Ghost's floatin thru walls shape shifting more than that movie

Vs

I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble
u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up

This was a good read.
Allen botched a word or 2 wording on the candy vending machine to cause it from being complete. & something took away from the survivor series line. It was something minor w.wording, otherwise his whole verse could've been quoted imo.
Nik, i almost quoted the first bar, & I'm pretty use to reading your steez but it was a bit off. Last bar didn't grab me. The cans & bud light one needed better wording execute to it. It was like a couple words shy of getting your point of reference across , although I saw where you were going with it.

Mvgt -Allen .

Cool read, fellas.
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