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Old 05-20-2013, 01:05 PM   #4
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I think we all get it to be honest. You calling us stupid!? lol But really this was decent in terms of schemes but if you wanna make something truly abstract, then go balls deep and make the shit really abstract you know what I mean? Like check one of Split's drops thats a perfect example because usually noone knows what the fuck he's talking about but it leaves a lasting impression on you. This on the other hand is laid out perfectly to say exactly what you wanna while not being abstract you're just giving allusions. Theres a difference. I hope you're not offended by this I'm just trying to give some constructive critism man but keep droppin. And go drop feed on other posts before upping your verse again.
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