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Originally Posted by IamBenT
hmm..
didn't get the first image. How are soldiers prepping giving birth? explain
never rhymed anything with "fight"
I like the double use for "protest", that was cool.
interesting ending, im sure you mean to tie this up with your edit.
Just some thoughts.
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Soldiers line up to die, so that life can begin and continue.
Im just gonna throw this out their since you missed the soldier part; soon I will making a rhyme that I will ask to be broken down to see if the artists at Netcees understand the literal transitions I go for. I am a very deep, intricate and even abstract at time and some of my best pieces have been overlooked because of it. Lol im not tooting my horn im just saying sometimes my shit aint respected to the degree I think it deserves, im sure everyone feels that way though.
For a petty instance.
Im the rat in the alley, starving for a fight.
(Abstract)
Im the food behind a cat, attacking a mouse.
(The rat becomes the mouse. (Abstract with the change.))
I almost hate bringing it up lol
Thanks for the questions and tips though my dude I hope you enjoy the finished copy. I got mad shit to do today so It's gonna be a while.