[IamBenT]

Mr J - Really liked this, very poetic, sort of rambling, great sense of personal voice and almost nostalgic/elegiac at parts, and a real sense of loss that's summed up at the verse

Geno - really built on Mr. J's, where he seemed a bit sad and wistful, you burned with that flame and understanding of the back and forth that comes through between real love. Some great quotable lines in this, i feel like near the middle the flow tapered off a bit but the images were consistent and the story yall both weave worked so seamless, great collabo writing..

but I ain't playin' round, because if you had to say it now
I'd blaze this round straight through our temples..lay it down
like I should have, but that perception is funny to look at...
because what's gone is gone darling...no need to look back

- just wow writing, great flow, great ending, great visual

A grudge, a dirty smudge of the paint, this woman of art
Never stands for anything until she puts a foot through ur heart

- great wordplay

Ur daughter -ur loss, the love of ur life's more like the death of u now
the cage u've built is ur home, and they ain't talkin bout lettin u out
Destiny -doubt, I know its true when they said the devils a bitch
Cause I could feel its touch when I layed down in bed with it -kissed

you did that "-rhyme" connection a couple of times, creative way to keep the flow, may not work for some, but it worked for me!