This is pretty nice. Poetic. As Bent pointed out your word choice is your strong point in this but I think you need to edit your last line because you misspelled "Sparing". Unless you meant Sparring and then I have no idea what the last line is saying. But on that note this piece is very abstract which I can enjoy from time to time and I enjoyed this piece. Keep droppin and make sure to drop feed on other posts man.
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