[IamBenT]

wow dope diction friend, love the interesting choices, only wished some of it was grounded more in the concrete, but the swag is strong, really liked the end here

Criminally gifted, I'll rob you of your common sense
Decrypting the written will leave you throbbing tense
Mark the earth with these numbers, mark of the beast
Sparring your life from offerings and depart from peace.....

I feel you ended when you were about to spark even harder shit, i also love that image of a chalice of sullen ballads, great natural rhymes with very little forcing.