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Old 11-21-2016, 08:23 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by Destroyer View Post
Mr. J, you are going to need to explain what the hell you meant when you said that closing with a line similar to my opener hurt me
how the fuck are they similar at all?
Starting it off with that whole slim & Nik A in the same breath & then using the slim fast plan line near the end kind of kept me from fully enjoying the verse. towards the end it seemed like a rehashed version of the intro, the whole coke zero idea I was on the fence about too. it just felt you were playing one card there.
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