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Old 11-21-2016, 01:54 PM   #12
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this was a GREAT battle, I enjoyed both verses from start to finish
both had some memorable lines as well, after solid 10 in Des verse it picked up.
the punches really started rolling in after that, I thought the opener was cool
almost closing with the same line kind of hurt you in the end though

Ill dropped some dope concepts though & kept each punch hard hitting
really liked the Mannequin line & everything afterwards was nicely done.
a very memorable battle to be honest but I gotta give it Ill due to consistency
both delivered though and made reading these battles worthwhile. dope shit
v/Ill
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