With this type of writing in this section, you gotta get rid of the "Lil Wayne" type of flow and think that we all are deaf so you have to write some creative lines. No set up words like "Okay" before a line doesn't work. Like Nat said check out the drops here and look at the structure and the flow of the lines and you will get some nice drops going....keep at it young fella...
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