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MMLP · 11-11-2016, 07:21 AM

I liked it, liked the message. Your flow is typically smooth, on point and easy to read.

the last part not rhyming I didn't like, loses fluency.

a nice, simple short verse

11-11-2016, 07:21 AM	#5
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	I liked it, liked the message. Your flow is typically smooth, on point and easy to read. the last part not rhyming I didn't like, loses fluency. a nice, simple short verse