[2tripple0]

Ehh wasnt feeling the ending even tho all around this piece was very capturing.. i think a lot of it u put a lotta personal spin on it... the way it starts with like a bunch of hillbillies at times it was hard to grasp the meaning of the piece.... its like theres a bunch of people interacting and i mean the writing and rhymes were good but again i didnt know what you meant or like what the story was actually about... i needed more information like really... a lot of it was hard to follow... but thanks for dropping i did enjoy this piece, and hopefully more to come.... this is a decent addition to he open mic...