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Old 10-30-2016, 10:26 AM   #7
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Very good...very cynical, probably a more serious tone than usual, but we live in cynical times, we need to get serious quick fast...this piece perfectly reflected what is happening in the world, and shared views and worries a lot of people have. I guess it was social commentary? It was very well written, less playful than a lot of your pieces, very direct and to the point...rhymes were top notch as always.

Thanks for the read man.
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