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Old 10-17-2016, 11:44 PM   #5
Mr. J
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Verse 1 caught fire real quick.
Verse 2 had a few lines but the delivery was weird
the 4th or 5th line felt like a stutter step..
you almost brought it,,but it seemed weird...ya know...

V/Verse 1, I just enjoyed the amount of punches that came quick
that closer was smooth in my eyes, pretty cool shit brah...
nice battle
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