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Old 10-08-2016, 11:49 PM   #3
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You're a Fish out of Water, Ya not catching any W's cuz ya Lines are Snagged Kid
Tear'll Flow when my punches Land and Make ya leave the site Faster than Bags Did

ok punch / set up was trash though

Such a has Been.. Ya Never Expected to be First, we'll call you a Second Thought
When we Read ya Text, it's a waste of a Thread.. I cant say we've Suspected ur Plot!

nah light here and concept was just soft

I'll Fly Straight with my Verse while you just deliver a Hymn - It's Clear ya Gone Gay..
So I'll bring the Heater n Make ya feel the Worse when I Rob ya faster than Kim and Kanye

eh set up was irrelevant and kanye didnt get robbed?

What else can this Con Say? We know you're a Liar, dude.. You can Chill with the Front
Admire You? No, but I'll visit cuz after this L you'll have to enter Rehab to Heal for a Month

nah miss

Technically Speaking, It's time to Shut ya Down - ya Flow is broken and We've Noticed It
Taxed and Leaking, Trumped.. Cuz i'll go IRS and write his Verse off before he's Posted His

didnt like this. felt flat


vs


squeezin the gauge when I rush ur block and see your squad in a pack
soon as I turn the corner ur team taking a loss..that's a Von Miller sack

cool set up, decent punch

don't bring that shiny shit 'round me son, you'll get killed in seconds
clipz'll leave u leanin like the Tower of Pisa
when I rob u like Kim in Paris

nah, set up was trash

u never tasted glory in war; never did anything valiant prick
but this knife'll lay ur guts out on the floor like u tryin to win a championship

eh i mean i guess it was ok but set up was trash

I got plenty women; just bagged ur slut n smothered her w/ dick
that lifestyle? u never Livid so u mad as fuck ur girl was another on my list

eh decent flip, kinda soft

u best respect my gangsta cuz I got guys that'll
do u for bud n some smokes
so if u ever utter Effigy my young goons will burn u alive in front of ur folks

nah didnt like this


soft battle here
to be completely honest here i was only feeling the sack line here so
verse 2 gets my vote
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