[Adonis]

Apologize in advance for making this a fairly quick vote...Both of you vote each and every week so even though I'm strapped for time I'm making a point of voting on your battle, 1love yes homo...

Phil Jack Son - I liked the direction, up until the final stanza. It seemed like you cut it way short, maybe pressed for time? A twisted verse of torture, food and the reasoning behind it all. I liked the details in the scenery, and pretty much the violent setting overall. I didn't like the ending how you said people don't call police on him, seemed like just a way to quickly end a verse that had potential and fell a tad short.

Wrecks - IDK man, it was some really good writing, from imagery to emotions but, not sure about the concept. Just seems a bit weak IMO. Flow was dope through out with the one exception; "forced them to seek" is just poor wording but it flowed well, I think this should have been changed for sure.

All in all this was a decent battle, I've seen you both drop shit leagues ahead of these verses in terms of skill and shit, but that's not to say these were ass, because both were written very, very well. Close bout for sure, it's all preference at this point. Both had story's, one more based off emotion, the other evolving around sadistic thoughts and imagery. I think you both should have expounded, Mike on maybe more character build up, Zen on basically more. But in the end, I enjoyed Zen's verse more, however....I'm giving my vote to Mike for one reason. I truly feel like his is a complete verse, where the other stopped in the middle of a story. I say I enjoyed Zen's more because I loved the tone of the piece, but the feeling of a story ending in middle just don't sit right with me. Respect, and good battle lady's