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Certain · 10-05-2016, 03:37 PM

@Zen, thanks. The introductory rhyme scheme is intentional scene-setting. I meant for this piece to build off a very slow cadence into something forceful that would only get more aggressive as it continued.

I will hit both you and @sraL back with feedback tonight on your most recent pieces. Same for anyone else who replies.

10-05-2016, 03:37 PM	#4
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	@Zen, thanks. The introductory rhyme scheme is intentional scene-setting. I meant for this piece to build off a very slow cadence into something forceful that would only get more aggressive as it continued. I will hit both you and @sraL back with feedback tonight on your most recent pieces. Same for anyone else who replies. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.