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Originally Posted by fathead
A losing streak... you suck Its not farfetched/
You Know Your Shitty If Bleak Says Your Bars Stretched/
This is an okay concept, but executed basically as a statement. Straight insults have to just be funny as fuck to hit and this wasn't really anything
So The Skull Your Sportin Must Be Hollow And Empty/
Cuz Head Will Bring It To You Like Ed Norton With.Envy/
I dont know if I'm missing anything here... is it supposed to be envy -> green -> hulk? cause if so it was a meh idea and not too well done - the idea needs to be a lot clearer (if im missing something I apologize)
Tempt Me And Ill Send You To See Your Dead Friends/
Theyll Say "Life Is A Double Sided Coin Flip And Head Wins"/
you flipped your own name here, but didn't really do it well - the iconcept was alright but it would have to be flipped a lot cool
Plus, I Know What People Must be Thinking/
An Undeveloped Style Like Yours Is Just Puerto Rican/
if this is a nameflip it didnt really come out, cause its just a statement tbh
Your Worse Than Bleak N When It Comes.To.Cruchtime/
Just Pm Me Dawg And Ill Write You A Punchline/
lol i think i used the same rhyme in the cyph last week... either way again its a statement.
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you have ideas but arent delivering them very well. hit the tutoring section, work on working ideas to use wp cuz at this point in text just about every statement is kinda played at this point
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Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz
God forbid u take back food chubby here gets violent furious,
Only time fat free from eating ANYTHING is when this faggit ever takes his diet serious.
alright
You don't got moves or game Pimp all ur shit played & wrong,
Last time Head sprung his 'body in a club' he dislocated a shoulder dancing to LL Cool J's Song.
ok
So Fuck def Jam im outside sparkin heaters & Holding Nines,
One Punch kill everything in Fat Farm quicker then THAT Old Bootleg Clothing Line.
working both ways was kind of a stretch here, okay idea
When I write my lines they go deep & leave you thinking
Faggot whenever your lines go deep is cuz your Homo ass enjoys going fishin.
lol wut/meh
You A Snitch & the Chrome im packin will make any type of Liar vanish,
Cuz this bitch Surf the Web Quicker then a random beach guy & spider fetish!oh god why
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yep, R!can had enough by way of okay ideas to get it
V/R!can