dope battle.
objective.
this was impressive storytelling and and just as equally impressive charaxter development...your shit carried it self along nicely. liek i mentioned before i like the story i thought you had great diction along with some stand out lines here and there. you set the scene pretty well and it thought the ending though a bit rushed in my opinion was still written will enough to pull it off nicely..dope verse.
tyson.
doep shit as well..on par with objective as far s tthe technical side of things go. toook a diferent route with the topic good contrast to your opponents approach..meaning you didnt show me the same exact things he did..you shined in your own manner...originality is the word lol. any way thought you had some dope references to back your lines up which i thought was clever and done well...as far as the story goes..i felt like you left for wanting... i mean it felt like you could of added more depth to it...justm y thought..
over all i got objective with a a better executed storyline...felt like he offered a bit more...nothing wrong with TYsons piece just but compared to objectives there is more to gain from objectives piece this week..great battle tbh.
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