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Old 09-27-2016, 09:23 PM   #6
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Mannnn Inno's first line was niiiice...that shit should have been flipped and used the first line as the punch instead, wasn't feeling the second line so much but could have been a decent opener, it could have been made to flow better with less basic rhyming but Bash's was soft, and it was difficult to follow...plus he used the word red twice in the same line which could have been avoided.

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