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Old 09-23-2016, 11:28 AM   #8
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Cash.

1. Nice personal, true
2. Coolish
3. Aiight
4. Massive dicks? Pause but lol @ the punch
5. LOL nice, should've been used after the 1st bar though. I like when you can follow like a narrative
6. Mmmm, ehh Prince wasn't gay & the misdirection was weak
7. Haha if he's really a nurse that hits
8. Cool albeit predictable
9. Ehhh nah
10. Maybe there's more to it that I don't get
11. Nah could've done more with this
12. Lol this is true but not a diss to him as much as it is to you
13. Haha
14. Lol this is nice
15. Lol dig dig



Karaoke

1. Aight aight
2. Lol, lol grrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaooooooww
3. Lol haha. Funny you both did this type of bar except white boy dissed a legend
4. Had to look up reference, lol'ed at video but more could've been done here
5. Aight
6. Fire to whip similar concept to Hush but I liked this
7. Cool
8. Ehhh nah too simple
9. Another Like bar, not going to look up the reference
10. Another reference, come on
11. Ok
12. Ok
13. you getting lazy now fam
14. This is cool but I've already seen someone use it. No fault of yours so I'll pretend I never saw and it's cool
15. Aight



You both were very similar as far as concepts & execution. Karaoke started off fire then just fizzles. Cashius was able to remain consistent. Karaoke got carried away with using references here. Pretty good battle. I sensed writer's fatigue in both writers though. I have to go with Cashius here.
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