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Pinot Grij · 09-16-2016, 11:51 PM

Vote -- Schad

His bar was super sophisticated - setup was nicely executed. From "case" to "People vs Schad" to the actual metaphor. The courtroom vocabulary was all there. Super clean. The metaphor was dope too, hit super hard when I first read it. It connected on multiple levels.

Des - same type wordplay you used for the "wit knees hit" last week. I like it, only problem is that "wit knees hit" is pronunced naturally. "Over Schad doe" - if anyone said "overshadow" in that manner, they'd sound retarded. Just felt a little more forced.

09-16-2016, 11:51 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Vote -- Schad His bar was super sophisticated - setup was nicely executed. From "case" to "People vs Schad" to the actual metaphor. The courtroom vocabulary was all there. Super clean. The metaphor was dope too, hit super hard when I first read it. It connected on multiple levels. Des - same type wordplay you used for the "wit knees hit" last week. I like it, only problem is that "wit knees hit" is pronunced naturally. "Over Schad doe" - if anyone said "overshadow" in that manner, they'd sound retarded. Just felt a little more forced. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.