[Gina]

This is my favorite thing I've ever read.

wear your heart on your tongue
-- what's your sleeve ever done?

That's amazing. I wish it was followed by something....more inspiring than "except deceive that we are spun...."

Then followed by something as sick as



pure... as we begun,
pure as we come in – naked, skin and bone.
ruled by will alone,
shifting stone to house our souls,
if we could just crack the mould
of our old habits I know that it’d grow arid lands
and make verdant the earth between us.

but you don’t listen. you’re a genius.


"Except deceive that we are spun from the same fabric of unchained magic. " doesn't fit to me. Maybe because the piece feels so...ethereal, that "fabric" kind of throws me off.


The rest if it is near perfect.