[Mike Wrecka]

ok cool battle

zygote - im gonna keep it real cause I think you would appreciate that. this was not one of your better pieces. in the beginning you said it was a ramble. well that was pretty accurate. didn't have much direction. just a theme. and the structure was fairly basic, especially by your standards. now it was a smooth read with some good lines in there and I did enjoy it to an extent. just way below your usual standards. overall its pretty impressive that even a bad showing from you is so solid.

zeedee- this was a cool verse. the parts I didn't like were when you tried to add the humor. like get beamed up and get reamed in the butt. that didn't work for me. the whole section after the picture was really good. kinda wish you just posted that part. you told a good tale that kept me interested and your structure wasn't next level but it was good. good take on the topic. creative.

overall zee dee had a very good but not great verse that takes the W and the title here on a zygote off week

vote-zeedee