Hush's punch felt lazy - if he's fat, wouldn't his stomach be in his lap when he sits down too tho? Also, when you stand up your lap is GONE.
Rican - nice concept, tough wording - not perfect, but I like the idea behind it more than a simple fat joke.
Vote -- Rican Theoryza1~
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