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Originally Posted by Objective
@ TYSON: Seriously.. I´m somewhat confused myself, I´m honestly questioning my own writing now. I thought I had an idea of what I write is great and what isn´t. I guess I can´t even judge my own work anymore. I try to be my worst critic, whenever I´m not really satisfied with what I write people like it, when I write something I´m satisfied with it seems to move in the other direction. Perhaps I´m overcomplicating things and simple straight forward messages do its deed. I mean, the stuff that Buddha said about really liking my verse, I can´t get myself to understand that personally. Perhaps there´s something I´m missing in my own understanding of what´s great and what isn´t of the stuff that I write? I read your piece and thought it was a lot better than mine.
People seem to enjoy the verse and it´s something I wouldn´t have posted because I thought people wouldn´t like it. I feel it lacks a lot of things in terms of the writing itself and the story. I think I need to do some serious revising about my work, put them up against eachother (the verses I´ve written so far in the tourney) and how I write stories since people seem to enjoy this type of writtens. Idk man. |
Not sure if I read your verse this week but...you are extremely talente. I'm doing a feature on the mag and went read just about every verse posted this season. And my man, you not only deserve to make playoffs but posses talent to win more then a couple heavy weight bouts. Cheers..#real talk