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@TYSON: Seriously.. I´m somewhat confused myself, I´m honestly questioning my own writing now. I thought I had an idea of what I write is great and what isn´t. I guess I can´t even judge my own work anymore. I try to be my worst critic, whenever I´m not really satisfied with what I write people like it, when I write something I´m satisfied with it seems to move in the other direction. Perhaps I´m overcomplicating things and simple straight forward messages do its deed. I mean, the stuff that Buddha said about really liking my verse, I can´t get myself to understand that personally. Perhaps there´s something I´m missing in my own understanding of what´s great and what isn´t of the stuff that I write? I read your piece and thought it was a lot better than mine.

People seem to enjoy the verse and it´s something I wouldn´t have posted because I thought people wouldn´t like it. I feel it lacks a lot of things in terms of the writing itself and the story. I think I need to do some serious revising about my work, put them up against eachother (the verses I´ve written so far in the tourney) and how I write stories since people seem to enjoy this type of writtens. Idk man.