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Old 09-10-2016, 12:54 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Exis View Post
Not when I was there he didn't.
well good sir let me break it down for you....*ahem*






His paragraphs garnered their share of laughs
the topic could be circles, then youd be staring at.
how he wandered door to door looking for lint hair
how you the small cub & he acts like the big bear.
then he will make you think about that last line.
treat it like staring at pictures, you getting swiped.
got a hand now so my homey calling me fingers.
so many drum rolls after a line hes a comedy singer...
but seriously though he would say some shit like...like..
got a fish in the water that I have been calling fly by
call me chip because you about to see me dip.
gotta take a walk man because my CDs skip.
or...not something like that but something similar.
and it wouldnt make sense because the topic is circles.
he plays beyond the perimeter & seems to lack a curfew.
he would say something like this isnt about virtue.
cause Im living life in the earth like my name is dirt dude
got your dog on a stick so we called him corn dog
he told me he traded the short bus for a shiny doorknob..
dog...he writes some ridiculous shit
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