I will also be short.
BB
I read your verse as a "dissection of a relationship." I thought that was a cool approach. The verse, from a stylistic standpoint, read very similarly to dead man's. But I think some of the phrasing could be improved.
Frank
It was a straightforward story and was funny at times. I'm probably just a couple years older than the Pokémon crowd. So, the subject matter wasn't as captivating to me as perhaps it was for others.
This was a close battle. But I'm voting for BB because I enjoyed his verse slightly more.
Vote: BB
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