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Old 09-07-2016, 05:15 PM   #10
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Quick vote.

Pent wrote an autobiographical piece with nice depth. Oh woe is the first world and all of that. Well written, with just one or two hiccups. Really captured a mindset, perfectly broached the topic. Soulstice really went for it. Great imagery, more ambitious than his opponent. For something so epic in scale, details have to be left out. Did not hit the topic very much at all. Maybe exactly half of the topic. Seemed rushed, not in a shoddy, quick way, but just no room to breathe. And I have a personal bias for the smaller, more personal pieces. I think pent got it which surprises me as I rate Soulstice as the better writer. Good show by both. Second best battle of the week.

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