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Old 09-07-2016, 04:35 PM   #9
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Going to be quick.

Bb wrote in his usual style. Which is great. A lot of highlights, great command of language and emotion. Phrasing excellent.

Frank barely wrote about the topic at all, had horrendous phrasing due to a forced rhyme scheme, and his story didn't hit its mark.

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