MVGT: Richard Corey
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Pent uP
PancakeBrah seems like you coif your hair in every verse. I like the intimate discombobulated interaction between your characters, though. A herky-jerky type flow. Unsettling and scatterbrained for a good portion, your rhythm is unnerving and extremely sporadic. Lots of staccato. Almost reads like a continuation of your season 2 finals verse. Honestly, I'm just not a huge fan of the quotations, but I guess I can appreciate it for the sake of this tournament. The choppiness of this piece has little to do with you ax protagonist. I just don't get all the coiffing, and quaffing. Being brutally honest here. It's not my cup of tea.
Richard Corey, :). Well gosh darnet, he is is who he says he is. VOTW. Welcome to Netcees. Powerful excerpt. I look forward to our inevitable match up.
MVGT: Old man corey
Self explanatory