[dead man]

United we stand in divided states of mind, and the common man
is a titan, given party favors, a hat and an olive branch

dope.

i really am tired of anti-US anti-government testimonials in rhyme form. shoutout to the soldier boy just-write. they're so tired and the niche is gone. they probably blew up after 9/11 for everybody doing keyboard renegade research job etc. etc. afghanistan iraq yeah we get it.

if youre so against what goes on in the governmental offices of america to the point its all you can think of when you sit down and wanna do some creative writing, vocalize your opinion, start a real life protest and change it.

otherwise stop.

BUT what you did here with the colors of the flag representing a progression of insight and perspective on the country was kinda cool. im glad you didnt try to use white color font and just went with the black.

you get originality points for your use of this seldom beaten pathway.

and the writing was pretty good. search yourself and try again tomorrow

thanks man



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