After just reading your AOWL verse this week and really enjoying it I decided to peep this and see if this was good, and it was. I still felt that the syllable count could have been cleaned up in a few spots, or simply just remove one word from a line and it'd work better for me.
Fuckin' sisters after it's done on some; ''That's what's happenin' son!''
Aint no lackin' in fun; I make city rats pity gats go backpackin' and run,
^^My favorite two lines in this piece. They made me lol and I have no idea why.
Great work here man. Keep droppin in the OM.
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