Adonis: Wowzer I really enjoyed this shit. After reading the first few lines I honestly thought this was going to be boring and you came out and proved me wrong. It picked up by the middle of the blue verse and never let up from there. I gotta say I really did enjoy this piece and the dialogue between these two were my favorite part and then the ending came and left me in a total mindfuck. Great work here this week Adonis.
Split: You were rushed and completely left without internet connection and honestly I can tell man. That means no offense of course but this work was less than I've come to expect from you but you still dropped a nice poetic piece here that worked quite well I gotta say but in the end it was a let down. A more thought provoking mindfuck verse from you like your Religion piece would've easily made this BOTW.
All in all I've got Adonis taking this easily...even though he says he's never read anything by me....And he just did no show love and I was one of the two verses he left feed on....
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