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ThisisDAM

The green of the fields would capture tears, each declined
I wasn't searching for heaven but merely a peace of mind
Pointing at something I could never explain
The skies, the stars, the weather, the rain
Celestial plains, a land of hope where no days go violent
A stroke of the brush & run across a rainbow smiling

- fantastic, really set the scene for the rest of the verse,
flow was butter smooth, not many errors at all through most of this
and the topic is so vivid and well described.

Liked the ending here too and you put each constellation to a great
use, its just so clever and well written that by the end of it you can't
help but smile and how the concepts and images all fit together like a glove
yet another great writer in the AOWL.

Inno

Dammed to a deep slum I am pesticide with a thoughtless stride
A hero to no one, no favors given and ive never owed one
Shun by the known son I labor to slip in to his kingdom an soil his gums
So evil he spews…so he can share in my view of things
So when they erect rocks in his honor…they will boo the sphinx

- this was pretty cool, i feel you always do a solid job of developing your speaker

Great pacing in this piece and you give us a strong picture of this raging
Devil preparing for battle.

the streets fumigated in blood while water turns to regurgitated mud
pestilence will engulfs like hurricane winds with a reverberated thud
- this was dope here, great images.

Love the ending, too, you really give us that picture of regret that Devil
possibly feels at now living this scorned eternity.

Great battle guys.

Inno had a solid story with great detail but didn't really get my curiosity
piqued or challenge me and entertain as much as DAM's verse, which was just
very clever and well written.

Vote -ThisisDAM gets it this week.