zygote: I fuckin loved this verse mainly because I love a good rant and this is what this felt like to me. You also displayed great technical skill like the Dr. Phil line which flowed perfectly and you displayed a sense of humor in your last line which is a great departure since most of these pieces in the league are always so serious. Nice touch adding that to make you seperate yourself from the rest of the league. It honestly reminded me of your drop against me in the beginning of the league lol. All in all great drop.
ZeeDee: All jokes aside from how you act in the predictions thread, this was an extremely dope piece. It reminded me of The Clockwork Orange and The Thing fucked and made a baby and this is the world their child would live in. The setting of your story sounded extremely fucked up, I mean EXTREMELY fucked up. Not a great place to live. But he way you counteracted the seriousness of this mass orgy of a planet was by adding in humor in several of your lines. Very nice touch since it makes the more violent lines seem that much more fucked up next to a touch of dark humor. Nice work here man.
All in all this is a tough one but I've got to go with ZeeDee. I could see this one going down to the wire though. BOTW.
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