This is another good battle right here.
Dam: Great first week showing here. Loved your take on the topic and in my opinion it was very creative and worked really well for you here. Great technical skill displayed too the way you moved from multi, to inners, and back to multis. It was pretty impressive reading this and it all felt as if this comes to you easily. For the negative of this verse, to be honest I really couldn't think of one. This was a very good showing here man. Welcome to the league.
Innovator: You brought this week that poetic vibe that I love from your drops. Very nice drop from Satan's point of view as we usually see him as the guy who says let's fuck shit up, this on the other hand was Satan giving a more introspective look on himself and really remembering the good ole days when you had it all. Nice touch to this I like it. I feel like you got that point across very well and the last stanza summed this piece up perfectly. Great work here.
All in all I enjoyed both pieces but I gotta give this one to Dam. Great work this week guys.
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