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Originally Posted by Mr. J
I thought this was a pretty cool short poetry piece.
toyed with something similar to this recently.
didnt really enjoy the thought of your cheeks shining
whatever that means...
regardless those first couple of lines remind me of Return of The G...
pretty good for a rusty piece.
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Thanks man I appreciate that, the shiny cheek thing is just a way of saying tears, wet cheeks... You get it lol just a fun piece to get back in the swing of rhyming really