Feels like you have been listening to a lot of Wayne.
I thought that opening line was lacking in impact.
(poison ive?) seriously? its ivy & shouldnt be sacrificed for rhyme
sure its a minor misstep but if you are the same guy who records then how does poison ive sound?
doesnt sound good you dont want your listeners to think you are ignorant do you?
anyway I guess it makes sense with the whole title of this topic...
you know what never mind the previous sentence & just continue doing you.
but seriously you said Benjamin Frankly? wtf? lol...no...no...no more
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