[Mr. J]

I thought that Pocahontas/Tonic section was pretty cool.
the start of it could have been twisted a tad differently but it worked
your choice in description helps build a perfect backdrop.
thought the device/disguise idea was pretty well blended
enjoyed the Dr. Zhivago reference as well, some great ideas so far
bourbon/churches was pretty good, this is probably best appreciated in full form
there was a mixture of stuff that could have been chopped.
maybe its meant to be like that...whatever the purpose this was smooth.
very...fresh