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Old 08-24-2016, 05:33 PM   #2
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I thought this was a pretty cool short poetry piece.
toyed with something similar to this recently.
didnt really enjoy the thought of your cheeks shining
whatever that means...
regardless those first couple of lines remind me of Return of The G...
pretty good for a rusty piece.
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